After showing my class my initial ideas, I asked them what they thought of it and how to improve it:

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Student 1 - Everything is well thought out and your narrative seems like an original idea. However have you thought about what costumes for the characters you will use. You stated about a powder paint fight and maybe using monochrome colours will emphasis the colour of the powder paint.

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Student 2 - I like the fact the conceptual ideas link to the narrative, but you still need to find a location to shoot part of your narrative as it may be hard to find somewhere open and unused to have a powder paint fight in.

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Student 3 - Very cool idea, everything seems well planned out.